August 17, 2009 11:36am Okay... you said you want critique... here you go. YOU... as a model... are very pretty and you're posing ability is strong. However, the colors in this set don't work well for you. Red on black or black on red are very hard to get to "pop". If the chair had been upholstered in yellow leather, your outfit would have been astounding... but because it is hard to differentiate between your skirt and the chair , the photo lacks the "pop" factor. Same with the flower in your dark hair. Next time use a white or yellow flower against your dark hair and you'll like the resulting pictures better. Now it's up to you... leave this comment in your port or find the "delete" comment button and delete this comment! lol