September 19, 2009 10:31pm I like this shot of you, shows you have potential as a model.
I am no expert by any means, but I see catch lights in your shot. And as it is more fashion like, catch lights dont have a real value to this type of shot anyhow.
September 18, 2009 6:04am All of your image are missing a catch light to the eyes if you can get those it would help add a twinkle to them. I have issues with your hands in this image the most critical is the odd cropping lower right part of frame which shows only your fingers.
