February 04, 2011 5:18am if you want critique also it would be nice to see the origina shot also. Some grey fog disturbs a little, perhaps covering something that I don´t know. The flakes are perhaps snow, are they?, and those could be a litte more realistic. I also miss the model´s other arm but is not retoucher´s fault. You are very skillful, I do some manipulation myself also and yours are much better. Best wishes!