January 12, 2007 6:57am Again lighting is too bright in my opinion, because often the use of shadows creates interest, here it is too hot...maybe a defuser (soft box) or lower temp would have helped...sorry I'm not much for describing how to make the lighting better...but it seems you have one hot key light...often key, fill, and hair lights can all help to balance out instead of just boom here's the light...Also the black jacket on a black background could become problematic for future shoots...be careful...here with the brightness of the light (could perhaps adapt in PS), you've got an outline of the wardrobe though. Hope this helps without being mean.
