March 08, 2011 3:54pm The lighting is certainly the main draw, but I feel like it's too heavy on the face. It could have been softened and the contrast hit a little harder to get a much more appealing effect. Your pose is good, but that facial expression is somewhere in no-mans-lands. Not quite a smile, not sexy with pursed lips, it's unique. That's where my eyes go. Good work overall, these are just some minor critiques :)