November 28, 2012 2:03pm Thanks for giving your invaluable opinion on this picture Michael. I would certainly try and keep the 'story-telling' part in mind :)
November 28, 2012 1:56pm You do this pose well, its a good shoot, better if it was telling a story, as it stands its a guy next to a white wall, why? if you were looking in a mirro or at a TV or watching someone doing somethink then we would understand what your doing/telling us.