May 16, 2013 7:18pm As a thumbnail, this did not attract my attn ... nor did it communicate the concept you intended. Once I clicked on it and viewed full rez, the story unfolded and the choices you made (dim lighting, main subject's face not shown, etc) suddenly made sense.
So my comment is that I enjoyed the story, but I didn't get it until I clicked on it ... and the thumbnail alone may not attract as many views as the story deserves.
Your passion for story telling is apparent ... and I'll be back to enjoy more of your creativity. Keep up the good work !!
