November 26, 2022 11:43am This is a veryVERY nice photo that easily could be improved.
What's good? STORY HAPPENING!!!
Something goes on, what is indeterminate so I can create my own story. General body posture. Left and right hands in beautiful configuration. use of windows and window light just right. 99% for the expression on your face.
To improve? The wrinkle between your eyes. Use matte finish or dulling spray outside the windows so you can't see thru them. Will also improve quality of light. Photog shouldn't be afraid to put strobe outside matte windows to give more light.
Maybe not worry about wrinkle between eyes. Adds a grace note to the unfolding story.
