March 26, 2008 2:53pm I like the creativity of this one, love the back ground.... but you seem to fade in it. You need to do something either with what you are wearing, the look on your face, something to make you stay the focus of the photo. I'm drawn in by the graphics and less focussed on you. I like the concept though. I think this would be GREAT if you were maybe topless with some vivid colors on your chest or something.... and around your eyes.
