October 18, 2008 9:46pm I see great potential in this image but the composition is, ..' off '. The burnt highlights in the back take the eyes away from the subject, you. The reflections giving you one blue eye and one green, could be arty or could be distracting. Just a thought would be a similar look, black and white, and a 'darker' scenario.
That's my two cents :P
Sorry if its a bit harsh.
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